Pure Harmony

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The Life Bond

How would you rate this story? (Please specify points in the box below.)

1. I can't describe just how awful this story is.
2. This could be good, but improvement is a long road.
3. It's alright. There's room for improvement but it's not awful.
4. I enjoyed it. Overall, it was pretty good. There were minor things wrong, but didn't disrupt the overall story.
5. Very interesting, engaging, and has me on the edge of my seat. I cannot wait for more!

Review

Feedback is incredibly helpful in the writing process and I appreciate you taking the time to provide some. Please tell me what you liked or what you feel could use some improvement. Thanks!

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